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My Dumb Choice...YOU

by sonawrote

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Aug 2004 · 6 comments

I fu*ked up! I chose your stupid ass cheap bastard always money there for u but never what I need just bare necessities nothing more never unromantic, selfish never think of anyone but yourself what you want what you need or so you think maybe I’ll grow guts and leave for real not just say it again and again with no change in your actions occasionally sweet to get your way with me cheap bastard even with your heart I can’t stomach it anymore I fu*ked up!

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[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Aug-04/9:55 AM Reply
Bulgingly stupid.
[n/a] Goad 19-Apr-05/4:37 AM Reply
Ok, please explain this c -> * for me.

You're choosing to use the word fuck in something you wrote. You're posting it on a board that has absolutely no censorship, ever.

WHAT. is. the. purpose. of spelling it fu*k instead of fuck? What does it accomplish? what does it do for you? I'm genuinely curious.

Is there something really really wrong or politically incorrect with the letter c, that I'm just not aware of?
[n/a] Damien › Goad 19-Apr-05/5:13 AM Reply
Can you say something good about anything.
You Fu"kin P"ss T"king B"astard. Are we aloud to use " oh great Goad.
[n/a] Goad › Damien 19-Apr-05/6:35 AM Reply
"Can you say something good about anything.
"

--yes, and I do.

You wouldn't know anything about it though, because you never bothered to look at anybody's posting history to get an idea of what they were about before you started pissing on them. (Or licking their ass, for that matter, lol. lolololol. lol.)
[n/a] zodiac › Goad 20-Apr-05/2:17 AM Reply
"Lick my ass" is the fiercest and most commonly used Arabic cussword. The next fiercest/most-common is, "God willing, you'll shit oil."
[n/a] ho_hum › Damien 20-Apr-05/2:47 AM Reply
Spelling young man.

Aloud: With use of the voice; orally.

Allowed: To let do or happen; permit.

Which of these do you think best fits your comment?