poemranker ::Sunset At Fountain by Shardik

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Free verse № 107476

Sunset At Fountain

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

Transvestite, taking ah shit in a phone booth "Hey baby, I'll suck your cock for a rock down the block" Breakfast at Denny's -- Pimps, and whistles -- fat black whores speaking the walk with red leather purses, swung. Jung Tongue Hung: But I am not one with the night I am restless, and perverse Like crab at Lunar eclipses And Disco in de-emphasize I have brass knuckles, and the will to kill. Still, I'll probably just jack some smack in back of an El-Camino on the way to the Del Rey Theatre to play Bingo With Cal Worthington and his Dog Spot. Because, after all, "If you need a car, or truck? Pussy Cow... Pussy Cow, Pussy Cow, Pussy Cow". Don't ask me for a cigarette. Don't ask me for directions Can't you see? I'm on a mission.

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[n/a] Prince of Void 8-Jul-04/11:55 AM Reply
i like those fours at the end ...