poemranker ::Green by berdabear

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Green

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Sep 2004 · 3 comments

Green Pools of desire Luscious whisps of black tickling flesh framing rivers of emotion a gateway to your soul Multidimensions of color flow endlessly Lost in green drowning falling flying cradled in spinning green.

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[n/a] daggatolar 24-Sep-04/5:30 AM Reply
any "green" ripe a pluck,like the above consumated in flesh is worth the "ticklishing" in the mouth.
[n/a] berdabear 27-Sep-04/2:52 PM Reply
Tag! Desired effect. Its like looking in the eyes of someone you love so much it aches inside. And you feel like drowning in it. Like your dizzy with desire.
[n/a] berdabear 27-Sep-04/2:53 PM Reply
Green eyes, envious hearts.
Its going pretty good sorta. As good as it can for me.