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Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jul 2004 · 6 comments

I waited in the lions shade for the hottest minute of the hottest hour of the hottest day, then I walked away.

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10 votes so far. Yours would make 11.10 votes so far

[9] Dovina 6-Jul-04/12:56 PM Reply

Run when the lions are lethargic. Good.
I think you mean lions' shade.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › Dovina 6-Jul-04/5:18 PM Reply

Yes, thank you. Applestrophes and I just don't get along for some reason.

[7] SupremeDreamer 6-Jul-04/11:56 PM Reply

I was left feeling unsatisfied. ;/ Seven.

[8] edpeterson 7-Jul-04/6:14 AM Reply

lions could use an apostrophe

[n/a] god'swife 7-Jul-04/12:26 PM Reply

What does this mean?

[8] Shuushin 7-Jul-04/5:15 PM Reply

feels firm - the rhyme closes it well.