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Multicultural motel

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Aug 2002 · Edited 31 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

I share a room with an arab, next door is an aussie, and but one a norseman. Hells angels reside upstairs, and half of Pakistan in the basement. But we all get on very, very well should you ask. We simply pick on the pikies at the bottom of the fucking garden.

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[n/a] Tascobar 23-Aug-02/6:46 AM Reply

A rather interesting sideways view of multicultural society and how several peoples can be integrated whilst still alienating others - a very moving piece. 8/10. I will follow your work, He Who Has No Mercy.

[6] Bachus 23-Aug-02/5:42 PM Reply

you sir are indeed a piker and a cad. how dare ye put the pakis down or the vikings, i will be back with a truck full of deputized polocks in a minute. stand fast.... oh the poeam ah...it could have been what's the word...ah..."amusing"

[8] Tarquin De La Bog 26-Aug-02/11:19 AM Reply

I like this piece Ming. 8. It could hardly be described as politically correct, but that makes it all the more amusing. The punchline is stark and bold.