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Free verse № 109003

Hands

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Jul 2004 · 0 comments

He stood at the window And the moon started crumbling. Like a forgotten corner, He did not like light. He was too dusty With age, Too sleepy. He lingered near his old sky And slowly turned Into dreams. In his shaky slumber He shed all the waters of his earth, He wept. At his lonesome window, A hand let go of another. A hand reached out Into the crumbling stars.

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