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Rescue My Heart

by pletcgm

Member since 2005 · Posted 22 Sep 2005 · 2 comments

Since we first met, My heart has raced like a vet. You have given me something, Something I call true love. As the time has passed My heart has amassed, Amassed with many feelings, Feelings I want to express. As my heart is at its crest, My brain has regressed, Regressed to the stage, Where you are at the top of the page. Now is a time for rescue, As my heart is on this silver platter, I ask this of you. Please rescue my heart.

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[1] Tintagiles 23-Sep-05/3:58 PM Reply
'Amassed with many feelings'?
[1] Tintagiles 23-Sep-05/3:59 PM Reply
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