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Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Mar 2004 · Edited 16 Mar 2005 · 2 comments

though we have never met... never seen each other eye to eye, your presence fills me. and i just have to smile... to forget , everything that has ever been wrong in my life, to once more hope, and be all right and when i find you, i hope soon. i won't promise the stars or the moon. only myself forever true, to be held by you, undoubtedly you... i know you're out there somewhere, somehow , someplace hope i go to all the right places know the right people till finally , i could look you in the eye...

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[7] Shuushin 29-Mar-04/5:19 PM Reply
"i won't promise the stars [OR]the moon" - this is a common mistake.

Its a nice sentiment.
[n/a] francis nor capule › Shuushin 30-Mar-04/5:56 AM Reply
ei thanks... i wont edit though, coz if i do the rankings would reset...: )