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Barflies and Bombshells

by wilco

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Jul 2004 · Edited 31 Jul 2004 · 8 comments

In the waning hours of a short-term romance; Waiting. Smiling. Hoping for a last second kiss before the bombshell drops.

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8 comments

[9] Dovina 28-Jul-04/10:52 AM Reply
May it never drop, if not from this barfly, then some other. Cheers
[9] Nateislate 28-Jul-04/11:32 AM Reply
Why is the bombshell gonna drop? Is she drinking too heavily?
[9] Dovina › Nateislate 29-Jul-04/11:08 AM Reply
It will drop because he expects it to drop.
[n/a] wilco › Dovina 31-Jul-04/4:05 PM Reply
It will drop because she is a smothering psychopath.
[9] Dovina › wilco 31-Jul-04/4:07 PM Reply
Even a black widow is great fun for awhile.
[n/a] wilco › Dovina 31-Jul-04/4:17 PM Reply
Yet the web becomes thicker and thicker.
[9] Dan garcia-Black 31-Jul-04/5:13 PM Reply
A second kiss? Not one last roll in the hay? You get the -9- points because you didn't ask for a -69- before the bombshell drops her drawers.
[9] INTRANSIT 1-Aug-04/6:27 AM Reply
Even with the title, this works both ways. Ugh! I'm feeling girlish this morning.