poemranker ::Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 75012

Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

The moment was manufactured Born from the cliché of an old movie I was summoned to see her For our final performance. I was not her Rock Hudson Just an extra in the background Edited from the celluloid for being unnecessary. She cried convincingly Diving into shaking palms Velvet pools made mascara flow From black to gray Stripping the bronze from her marshmallow cheeks. Her protean emotions surfaced Changing like the tides of El Nino, The calm that turned to tempest, She shouted and she screamed With reason impaled on her forked tongue. She had found someone younger A sycophantic failed magazine pin up Who emptied bins on Tuesday dawn The type that talked slang With yellowed fingers, From smoking King size to stub. I someone older missed the routine, Meals fixed for certain days My chair that faced the rolling fields Listening to her chant ‘Jerry Jerry’ But at the end of the day in retrospect I have come to accept, That living alone is great company.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.44 weighted 6.22 rank 962 views 231 View voting details →

9 votes so far. Yours would make 10.9 votes so far

4 comments

[10] INTRANSIT 13-Nov-03/1:56 PM Reply
Capitalize protean? Marshmallow has to go. It's too young. Beyond those, RRRRRoll'em!
[9] titan69 13-Nov-03/1:58 PM Reply
I love the last line. living alone is great company
it says so mutch
[8] J.B. Manning 14-Nov-03/11:35 AM Reply
I love it. I agree with Tranny. Marshmallow loses the fine wine flavor that permeates throughout the rest of the poem. Good one.
[5] Jill Stockinger 27-Dec-20/4:05 PM Reply
Too disjointed