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Free verse № 109261

Across The Ocean

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Jul 2004 · Edited 28 Jul 2004 · 0 comments

I look across the ocean I see your face and no emotion I wish I could go across that ocean I wish I could swim across the sea and if I could go over the ocean I would see you once more by me I wonder what your doing what your thinking so I glare more over the ocean and see your face and no emotion I wonder how your going along with the heavens above I wonder if your sailing with the doves Oh I wish I could go across that ocean I wish I could swim across the sea and if I could go over the ocean I would see you once more by me I wonder how your getting along with the angels I wonder if your fullfulling your dreams I wonder if your doing alright I wonder if your sleeping at night or maybe your watching over friends and family I wish I could go across that ocean I wish I could swim across the sea and If I could go over the ocean I would see you once more by me

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