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I Dream.....

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jul 2004 · 5 comments

I dream about my hand in yours, and of your warm embrace. I dream about my lips on yours, and the smile upon your face. I dream about the love we'd share, and of your beauty and grace. The void you fill inside my soul -no one can replace.

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Jul-04/3:09 PM Reply

I Cream.....

I cream whene'er my gland's in yours,
or 'pon your d'formÃ¨d face.
I cream into your Sunday drawers,
which feels unb'liev'bly ace.
I cream all o'er the gloves you wear
e'en though they're hard t'replace.
Your voids I fill with my Swiss roll
'Til cream's all 'bout the place.

-10-

[n/a] Shuushin 29-Jul-04/6:19 PM Reply

"and of your beauty and grace."

meter needs tweekin, maybe... :

"your beauty and your grace"

Good for what it is.

[n/a] frdup717 › Shuushin 29-Jul-04/8:26 PM Reply

your right about the tweek
i knew it sounded off somehow

[6] Bachus 29-Jul-04/9:47 PM Reply

Death by vagina.

[10] tisa7 30-Aug-04/2:21 PM Reply

who is this about