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I Can't Move On

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Aug 2004 · 5 comments

I love you and I know it will never fade but something inside me tells me this is all a waste. Even when you make me smile my heart is drowning in pain. I should tell you good-bye and put my past in a box but the thought of life without you makes me stop. So maybe I'm crazy even hopelessly in love Just the fact you might love me too is what keeps me from moving on.

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5 comments

[8] klosterfobik 15-Aug-04/4:39 PM Reply

the ending is good - try a little amending though. -8-

[10] Miggy 15-Aug-04/4:43 PM Reply

nice...just nice, keep writing

[2] kalikopeli 15-Aug-04/8:20 PM Reply

Move on and seek closure

[5] sliver 16-Aug-04/10:27 PM Reply

Seems to stop. abruptly. once too many, times. rewrite.

[9] affei09 28-Aug-04/1:50 AM Reply

i love it