poemranker ::Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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Free verse № 39686

Alphabet

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Feb 2003 · 4 comments

As I sit in the shadows seeking mercy Begging for answers Calling out for my freedom Desperate for salvation Expecting only sad rejection Finding no true direction Greatly given to self reflection Hope has left me Is this the fate of humanity Justice where are you Killed by industry Lost or have you decided to leave me My life hangs in the balance of your scales No one ever told me that you were walking wounded Or that you were sick Please release me from my failure Questing for something I know that I can not grasp Razorgrin please help me with this task Smiley is that too much to ask Take me from this mockery Ulitimatly someone, anyone, please set me free Vertically I guess I'll fall Who knows where I'll land X marks the spot I guess Yet I'm afraid to leap Zounds the price for being stupid is awful steep

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4 comments

[n/a] razorgrin 10-Feb-03/6:52 AM Reply
Wow, I'm in a poeme! I'm flattered!
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › razorgrin 10-Feb-03/12:12 PM Reply
What??? No comments on my lack of knowledge?? No insults about my spelling? The voice of truth/reason not putting me down? I'm amazed. No, no I don't believe it. Tell me what you really think smiley(even though I have noticed the lack of a zero here, of which is unusual). <-I'm glad you like it(even if, yes I'm saying this before anyone else does, I still think its not that great).
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jun-03/9:21 PM Reply
This is about seeking something that doesn't seem to exist, in away making fun of razorgrin(just slightly) and using my ABCs to cause I was trying to get more creative.
[n/a] razorgrin 10-Feb-03/12:56 PM Reply
you are such a CUUUUUTE little thing. I wrote more perversions for you.