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Free verse № 111005

Hold and hold me hold tight

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

Hold and hold me hold tight Until this passing pass passes And melts quick and quickening Into spring flowering and Exploring every nook and Corner until finding it finds That shiver that rolls and Rolling rolls and rolls into Shakes that bounce Again and shakes again and Shakes that bounce Again and shakes again and Hold and hold me hold tight. Winter is a repeating desert, Blind me, blinding light.

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[9] nentwined 27-Aug-04/10:55 AM Reply
this is pretty cool. I was a bit worried by the gimmick early on, but... it flows nicely; definitely captures something and shares it. :)