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Free verse № 111085

corrupting you

Member since 2001 · Posted 27 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

if you keep your voice gentle, i just might find the time to crawl into your open mouth and down to your stomach with the butterflies and shove them back into their cocoons. Just dont worry, my sweet, i'll slide down and out of your body with ease. You'll have your release. And I'll have mine as i twist up your mind to concord with the images tacked to my walls.

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3 comments

[9] nentwined 27-Aug-04/2:56 PM Reply
twisted.

I like. :)
[7] Brandy_n_Cali 27-Aug-04/9:33 PM Reply
NICE!!
[10] sliver 7-Nov-04/2:04 PM Reply
Made me chuckle, actually.