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Free verse № 111200

Andrew

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

I look into his eyes and I'm lost and found I bury my face into his chest and want to sufficate and live forever I kiss his lips and I pull away just so I can kiss him again

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[3] klosterfobik 28-Aug-04/9:16 PM Reply
I look into his eyes and I'm tossed and bound
I bury my face into her breast and want to masterbate and live forever
I kiss her lips and pull away just so I can suck ass again.
[5] Dovina 29-Aug-04/9:04 AM Reply
Too much cliche.