a fresh start

Member since 2005 · Posted 23 Sep 2006 · 5 comments

its amazing something so simple how it changes things the most valuable things a faint familiar feeling that certain one youâve had it before but different iâve said it before love a four letter word with a whole new meaning not yet just the beginning a miracle in the making? disaster in the waiting.. positive thinking great feelings flowing crazy thoughts exploding a fresh new start hope, faith, confidence

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[3] nypoet22 23-Sep-06/9:26 AM Reply

instead of just telling people about the feelings, it might be helpful to try to show through concrete images how those feelings manifest themselves. right now the words are so completely vague i can't find anything to latch onto.

[6] Dovina 23-Sep-06/1:02 PM Reply

Even if it has all been said many times, the impact of it must be like that great change of address we've read so much about, but none of us can describe from experience.

[1] Edna Sweetlove 23-Sep-06/7:12 PM Reply

boring and illiterate

[10] <~> 29-Sep-06/1:35 PM Reply

the perfect pimple! 10, i say! 10!

[10] <~> 29-Sep-06/1:35 PM Reply

except, lose the last line.