poemranker ::I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62

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I WILL SURVIVE

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Sep 2004 · 5 comments

your not the first to hurt me i've been through many a pain probably more than some people can count on their one hand I was molested as a child and yes I was even raped the kids at school teased me and said I had an ugly face one brother was arrested for murder another in prison most of his life my best friend was even killed by her boyfriend who just went wild I had been through a paternity suit against the chief of police my marriage was a breakdown cause of abuse that went so deep I had to take my son to court to help him turn out right twice I even got engaged and they both got cancer and died I had two brothers killed in accidents separate years, but on the same day three times I tried to kill myself and I failed in every way I had boyfriends who used me friends and family have passed away all my life i've struggled with depression and I learned to live day to day so yes sid, you did hurt me and yes you made me cry but I know I will go on I am strong, I will survive.

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5 comments

[8] sliver 4-Sep-04/8:25 AM Reply
Keep fighting. It's all about how you deal with the situations you are presented with in life. And, no matter how bad it is, it's never worth suicide!
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Sep-04/6:19 PM Reply
Your poeme is a colossal downpour of sick.
[6] Dovina › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Sep-04/7:20 PM Reply
Yes, that's what she is saying, and no doubt appreciates your encouraging 10.
[6] Dovina 7-Sep-04/7:22 PM Reply
This isn't very well written, but maybe I couldn't do better in your circumstance.
[0] edpeterson 29-Oct-04/4:25 PM Reply
you have an ugly face