poemranker ::Cruel Twist by ifni

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Free verse № 112

Cruel Twist

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 1 comment

treasured glance treasured chance don't snatch my dreams away so casually, with a turn of your head and that cruel twist of your lips- so inevitable expectable predictable so gently malicious so sweetly vicious what else could you do? everything I know of love I learned from the cruel twist of your lips. 2/20/99 J. Vancil

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[n/a] deleted user 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
last line rings so false to me.