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Ichobod Racecar

by T. Jonathron Remp

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Sep 2004 · 4 comments

Let's discuss for a minute A future of noise, Of banging and clanging and ridiculous Toys, Let's discuss for a second a beautiful Crescent-- Moon shiver sliver on the tip of my finger, Dolloping like the doves do(n't) on sour cream and whiskers. Of a cylindrical mave, an enclave of onion dust: A future where the river must cling to it's Gypsy heritage. Or "Romani" as they call themselves. Please research more their beautiful past.

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[5] LintyWeenis 11-Sep-04/5:52 PM Reply
It's the strangest thing, I can't help but read your stuff. It's not the best thing I've ever read, far from it, but I keep reading it. So bonus points there.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › LintyWeenis 11-Sep-04/5:56 PM Reply
Thank you!
[9] patty t 12-Sep-04/6:15 PM Reply
don't they call themselves the 'roma'? -9-
[8] Bachus 13-Sep-04/3:19 PM Reply
"it's" should be its