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o, whale (Free verse) by A. Nomaly
I only want one thing and that's a whale, a great bigger than me size whale with little tiny eyes way too small but seeing me just as well and all its blubbery whale skin so weird to touch I won't touch it so much but just think and half asleep and half awake be with my whale friend

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9964
Posted: September 16, 2004 8:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2004 8:02 PM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 16-Sep-04/10:58 PM | Reply
Fucketti, soused
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