poemranker ::Mystery Lady by longships

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Mystery Lady

by longships

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Sep 2004 · 3 comments

Where did you come from? With no date to speak of. Where do you go when the lights go out? Your naked flesh, Green eyes that look away. Lips pink, but not in smile. Rosy cheeks and round face, Dark brown hair held tight in curls. Do you visit us in bed? Can you hear conversation? One hand rests upon your breastline. Does the rest of you look so choice? Where did you come from? With no date to speak of. Where do you go when the lights go out? Mystery lady can you see anyone at all?

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[8] darylchew 28-Sep-04/10:27 AM Reply
interesting. who or what is mystery lady.
[10] titan69 28-Sep-04/1:05 PM Reply
magic mushrooms?
[n/a] longships 3-Oct-04/1:29 PM Reply
No magic mushrooms. Just a poem about a picture that used to hang on my wall.