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Bridesmaids in the Rain

by wilco

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Sep 2004 · Edited 12 Feb 2005 · 7 comments

Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes. Drinking wine and stale champagne and dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain. I remember watching you board the train against a September sunrise. Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes.

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7 comments

[1] Special Needs 29-Sep-04/9:40 PM Reply
Strap on a pair!
[6] That One 29-Sep-04/10:19 PM Reply
leaves little room for imagination

"last of the first glass" good line
[8] Dovina 3-Oct-04/10:57 AM Reply
It's the cahmpagne. Love and marriage - they seldom go together. Dream on and enjoy the slow dance at a wedding that isn't yours. Good thoughts
[n/a] wilco › Dovina 4-Oct-04/8:02 PM Reply
I seem to have had a brain fart there.
[9] MacFrantic 12-Feb-05/8:25 PM Reply
so good, very nice picture. *9*
[5] Plaidypus 14-Feb-05/9:02 PM Reply
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
[n/a] wilco › Plaidypus 15-Feb-05/2:12 PM Reply
Geez, I guess I made you mad by not liking your HTML thingie. Sorry.