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Solitary Being

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Oct 2004 · 1 comment

You sleep so nice You're a solitary figure Slumped in half with a crease down your back; Your breath takes time It's a solitary movement Moves the room drifts my thoughts into sleep; Orion's belt Is my solitary vision Stars and stripes and other bright things; My ears burn some solitary ringing there's no sound no sound in this room; The morning light Casts its solitary shadows Growing strong growing stronger on you; I hear your voice A solitary rumble God knows how to laugh after all.

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[8] Skippychew 4-Oct-04/4:19 PM Reply
Beautifully written.