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Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jun 2007 · Edited 16 Jun 2007 · 7 comments

In the dark sanctuary where I pray for the love For those scars are concealed inside Forgetting whys and hows of the destiny I do not want to say how it could happen I mesmerize my words Within fettered heart in the stated delirium Moreover, dreams entwine me from time to time Within my mind from the ocean of your memories I do not find that eternal happiness of a god After thousand years of lives No wing for this fallen angel That he turned into a lover in the paradise lost I said enough The void that turned my colors into grey I have done enough The agony that buried me into that grave I have shed tears enough The beloved who can show me the love I havenât felt enough The love, which I was born for that

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[n/a] ALChemy 15-Jun-07/8:55 AM Reply

Etc.

[n/a] Prince of Void › ALChemy 15-Jun-07/10:47 AM Reply

ETC..

[8] Skamper 16-Jun-07/10:54 AM Reply

I'm just confused - by the language and the message.

[n/a] Prince of Void › Skamper 16-Jun-07/11:11 AM Reply

I'm just lost - by the empty spaces and afterwards the void is between us

[8] Skamper › Prince of Void 16-Jun-07/11:23 AM Reply

I get the void part - only too well...It must be the language that I find difficult. line two do you mean scars? mesmerizing my words - not sure on that concept...putted me into grave? I haven't feel enough? Some lines seem to twist another way, just wanted to clarify.

[n/a] Prince of Void › Skamper 16-Jun-07/11:38 AM Reply

well did u watch the movie called " lost highway "
?

[8] Skamper › Prince of Void 17-Jun-07/12:05 AM Reply

no can't say that I have - worth it?

this reads much better, there are a few things I would change but it's all personal preference.