poemranker ::That Shade by Enkidu

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Free verse № 144492

That Shade

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Jul 2006 · 1 comment

That shade of white The flag that flies outside your door Surrender? Why fly it then? The chimney smoke extinguishes In the opaque sky And it's white, still Wind-blown waves of future war Bending to forever-mores That sickly shade of white Turning shadows from the moon

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[8] Zoe 10-Jul-06/4:13 AM Reply
Nice Oriental sounding poem.