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Fast Dreams

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Oct 2004 · 6 comments

Racing through another dream Panic is the enemy Must stay calm, Must stay cool Hide yourself, silence rules. Another game of Cat and Mouse Dashing through an empty house Shattered windows, smashed alarms Solitude the only charm. Pick up speed Itâs drawing near This dream is over- The future here.

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[8] Rollsoftoiletpaper 16-Oct-04/7:52 PM Reply

I love a good rhyming scheme :)

[6] Dovina 17-Oct-04/9:11 AM Reply

I don't see how you race through a dream.

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › Dovina 17-Oct-04/1:48 PM Reply

As in a nightmare? If you're telling me you've never had a dream in which you were running, well then I'd say I have a hard time believing you.

[6] Dovina › cuddlytiger17 17-Oct-04/2:21 PM Reply

Yeah, okay, you were running in your dream. If only I'd known.

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Oct-04/6:56 AM Reply

"Here is found a paradox in that during the latter third of the nineteenth century, in a period characterized by the vilification of the tramp, there is a concomitant process occurring that also eulogized them." from "The American Hobo" by Colin Beesley

[6] Dovina › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Oct-04/11:42 AM Reply

How utterly relevant! She obviously dreams of tramps, eulogizes them.