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Winter Disaster

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Oct 2004 · Edited 25 Nov 2004 · 1 comment

A bridge, whose falling guillotined a ship that trusted it to hold, now bobs in a mess of floated steel already whitened by the cold. The ship, cross-sectioned as a blueprint, goes down in two. The river sighs and shuts its two cold banks above, locking its trophy in a case of ice.

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[8] celticskatermatt1 5-Dec-04/4:33 PM Reply
this poem was a disater( jk ) very nice!