poemranker ::_______ by Dovina

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Free verse № 154252

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Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Oct 2007 · 3 comments

An egret stands beside the trail Voyeurs—she and I Rest today, tomorrow fly

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3 comments

[8] Ranger 25-Oct-07/2:03 AM Reply
It sounds fantastic, although I'm not sure that "underlined nothing" is such a catchy title...
[n/a] Dovina › Ranger 26-Oct-07/4:18 PM Reply
It's because haiku is best untitled. Of course if I called it haiku, I'd only get the dunce comment "5-7-5."
[10] INTRANSIT 27-Oct-07/3:22 PM Reply
I likes.