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Garden

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · Edited 7 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

I want my own garden- a little corner of technogeekdom to nurture and keep- the 'net breathes for me, a living thing- can't you hear it's heartbeat? I want my own garden to keep, with the wild viri and the worms underneath, and all the chaotic thrumming that twines through its soul. 8/23/01

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[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

pretty but I find it too much like prose to wrap myself in.

[n/a] deleted user 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

Very nice. Made me think of a Frost poem -- but I can't think of the name.

[7] forestchild7 9-Jul-02/3:29 PM Reply

cute and silly... not bad... although I don't know what virii are?? *smile*

[8] Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/2:57 PM Reply

Liked it muchly! Cute use of metaphor.

[10] Tekara 20-Sep-02/12:26 AM Reply

Wish I had seen this one earlier. It's just neat!