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moving away

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Nov 2004 · 3 comments

moving away away from this place look at its face the worlds disgrace why did i leave why did i go im confused too abused

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3 comments

[5] Dovina 14-Nov-04/12:51 PM Reply
What good is the last line, except to rhyme?
[n/a] leonxic 14-Nov-04/1:49 PM Reply
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[6] jessicazee 14-Nov-04/7:26 PM Reply
who needs punctuation when the place has a face?
Maybe some nu-punk song lyrics.