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Pimple № 79586

HALF

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

(no re-writing alowed!) fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck this must be it. i'm ready to flip. changing direction to diffrent intentional infections... oh, did i forget to mention i don't care right now. i'm not here right now. something eles is running my mind. fuck you all. spitting out shit with my lips of wit (what) with your lips so wet i'll let myself do this thing we will both regret. how much sence can half a man make. half a mistake. half awake. half ready to break your heart. half ready to heal and start to figure out wich half of me is acually real. HALF OF ME CAN'T FEEL !nairb uoy kcuf you suck...uoy etah i

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[6] INTRANSIT 16-Jan-04/6:37 AM Reply
the backwards letters are pointless. fix the spelling.
[10] penguin fiend 29-Jan-04/6:31 PM Reply
nothings imperfect about this to me