poemranker ::You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night by T. Jonathron Remp

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You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night

Member since 2004 · Posted 17 Nov 2004 · Edited 17 Nov 2004 · 2 comments

You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night by Penelope Snip How dare you Open up the large gelatinous bubble suspending you from the top of the cave made from paved jelly wave And fall out onto my pony and pout Something about how the Armies of Ovaltine Were out to steal your submarine And then just leave me stranded there Like an orphaned bear Without even a pane of lizard brain to keep me sane.

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[7] MacFrantic 17-Nov-04/6:28 PM Reply
senseless and wonderful *7*
[n/a] Bobjim 18-Nov-04/7:34 AM Reply
I like this. I don't have to try and find any meaning in it and it's completely random.