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Emotions Color Your Thoughts

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Nov 2004 · 7 comments

Emotions color your thoughts Shades of rage, jealousy, depression Entwining, circling one another Fusing, flowing simultaneously Fabricating an obscure rainbow Seen through a cloudy day. Skies of red, green, blue Fading together, Forming an intricate Vision of another life; Free of three-dimensional logic.

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[7] Dovina 27-Nov-04/2:51 PM Reply

It starts out on a good path, but wanders into netherland, losing focus.

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Dec-04/12:08 PM Reply

Beautiful... what colour is hope?

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Dec-04/3:46 PM Reply

Thank you. And I have no idea. If I figure it out, I'll let you know. :p

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › cuddlytiger17 6-Dec-04/5:40 PM Reply

Please do. But until you find out, I'd like to think that the colour of hope is love. What do you think?

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Dec-04/7:36 PM Reply

I think you can make it whatever "colour" you'd like.

[7] Dovina › cuddlytiger17 6-Dec-04/7:45 PM Reply

That's the way.

[7] Crakyamuni 3-Jan-05/4:01 PM Reply

I like it because of it's final line. Three dimensional logic is fuckin restrictive, and nothing will cause you more heart ache. Hope is fleeting, happiness fleeting, glory fleeting.. but we can have the time of our lives chasing them down. This is and "we are".