poemranker ::All About Mistakes by travelingsk8er

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All About Mistakes

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Nov 2004 · 3 comments

Concrete, Asphalt, Rocks all around, It really hurts when you fall down. Long hair, Pretty eyes, Sun in your face, Some things vanish without a trace. Cool shades, Skateboard, you wont get far, If you get hit by that car. (chorus) You, are my mistake. Please dont listen...I'm always wrong. Please dont walk away now..or yu'll have a mistake too.

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Dec-04/12:17 PM Reply
Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, you include an utterly random chorus at the end. Nice one!!!11
[8] Dan garcia-Black 6-Dec-04/9:13 AM Reply
How can she walk away if she's on skates?
[10] celticskatermatt1 6-Dec-04/3:23 PM Reply
what r u talking about?
no one is on skates....only a skateboard