poemranker ::Falling in Love by disturbedone182

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Free verse № 11613

Falling in Love

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

She looks at me with her gorgeous eyes They make me feel ever so high Across the room, she smiles at me She is so beautiful and heavenly We talk on the phone all night long I am petrified that I will say something wronga Every night, I pray for even a single kiss A momentary taste of breath-taking bliss While together, I just come apart Trying to find a way into her heart She fits perfectly within my arms I swear, I will never do her harm I would jump the fence, or run the mile For in the end, it is worth the while I would love to walk with her hand-in-hand Barefoot across the midnight sand She carries herself like a precious dove I think I may be falling in love She is my strength when I am weak She is the treasure that I seek She lifts me up when I am down The one for me may have just been found I lie awake for hours upon my bed While thoughts of her race through my head Waiting to talk to her, I can hardly wait Maybe someday, we will date Does she think of me in that way? I think of her both night and day I do not know how to tell her, but wish she knew There is no limit to what I would do No matter what different paths our lives take My love for her will never be fake ...

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[4] anagram 27-Aug-02/7:03 PM Reply
Not bad. Why 182? This number for some reason keeps coming up.Are you referring to Blink 182 or maybe Kurt 182 or something else.Please satisfy my curiousity.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Aug-02/7:04 PM Reply
Pfft. 'disturbedone182'? Read the first few lines of the poem. Do you really have to ask?
[4] anagram 27-Aug-02/7:08 PM Reply
Yeah 'fraid so.I take it you are talking about the film which I have never seen, somebody just mentioned it recently.Either that or I have become victim to what I think is my second failure to understand an Americanism this evening.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Aug-02/9:07 PM Reply
No, I just meant that this person is about 95% likely to be a Blink 182 fan. But what would -=Dark_Angel=- know? He wants only a few crunchings and munchings.