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Storms

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Dec 2004 · 4 comments

Crackling clouds interrupt the drive Of a man bent on distance and need To talk God out of sanctimonious Moan-ings of celebrity and thunder. The beach is not right The desert has gone vague Mountains, now small Distance themselves well From land-slide and flash-flood. A packing house packs Guts of shredded domestication For housewives on cell-phones Landroving themselves into Another year of plastic and Urgent mouth-fucking. Were I the rain? I'd wash them all away With a wipe of wet hand And a million slapped pounds Of rock, mud, and death. But I am a poet So today, in this storm I will instead; dream the impossible And teach my son To light a fire.

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4 comments

[10] Bhaskaryya 28-Dec-04/10:21 PM Reply
Very beautiful!!!!
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Dec-04/2:06 AM Reply
Freaky twist at the end
[10] Lifeboatman 29-Dec-04/4:38 AM Reply
again, unselfish... beautiful.. 10
[9] auscot 29-Dec-04/9:45 PM Reply
You are a poet and I like your style, it says something and says it well.