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Free verse № 12053

A Love in the Distance

by kristenk69lover

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

A love in the distance... It's so hard to live without his touch, A simple kiss or hug from him, And not being able to look into his eyes. To say, "I love you," And to comfort him when he is down, And has trouble getting back up again. When will this distance go away? When will he be able to hear what I say, Without talking on the phone? When will my hurting subside, And when will we both stop being alone? I know it hurts you, But you have to be strong! If we get through this and love each other just as much as we do right now, Our love will be lifelong. I love you, Baby, Even though we're so very far apart. Always remember that I love you. You hold the key to my heart.

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4 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Aug-02/4:24 PM Reply
It's funny. There are so many things about this poem that make me want to stab myself repeatedly in the thigh with a bread knife, but they all fade into insignificance when compared to the awful, sucking horror that is your use of upper-case 'B' in 'Baby'. You. Are. Not. Special. Indeed, if your dull, sappy, content-free poetry is any indication, your most outstanding feature is your complete lack of any outstanding features. And so sayeth -=Jesu=-.
[0] poetandknowit 29-Aug-02/10:34 PM Reply
I love you too, Baby. Why is baby a proper noun, though? Is there someone else? Who will stick up for you when I am gone. This is true art. I am hanging it on my wall.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-Aug-02/9:12 AM Reply
You're just following people whom you dislike and contradicting everything they say. This poeme is awful. You know it, I know it; even kristen here knows it. So let's just be mature about it, OK? Great!
[10] Tineke 18-Dec-03/7:36 AM Reply
so beautifull, there is a guy that i love far away from me. It is hard...
Tineke