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Free verse № 12073

All Around Me

by brazen

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

Sitting on a computer chair, Window in front spews outside air, Just put down a soda can, Cooling underneath a ceiling fan, To the right is my Grandfathers' urn, Typing with a finger that has an oven burn, Printing out an overpriced Dream Theater ticket, Distracted by the kitchens dripping spicket, Piece of shit computer crank, Opened my monthly statement from the bank, Thinking about how much I have to pee, Have to wait for this download to be free, Maybe I'll just type some ryhmes, Then go out and buy some limes, My Dos Equis needs them to taste their best, Now its time for me to rest.

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[7] anagram 29-Aug-02/6:37 PM Reply
I like this simplicity.Say what you see.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Aug-02/6:39 PM Reply
"'Cheeks robber'...?" "Good but it's not right. Sarah? No? Alright, take a look. It was 'arse bandit'!!"
[7] anagram 29-Aug-02/6:47 PM Reply
Just realised you must be from the UK DA.Surely Roy wasn't screened across the pond.
[n/a] Venus 29-Aug-02/10:14 PM Reply
Go outside and play, will ya?
[n/a] brazen 30-Aug-02/10:11 AM Reply
a momentary lack of creativity plus my overwhelming sense of boredom makes for a dangerous and deadly bout of verbal moonshine.