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late night delirium

by not_a_philosopher

Member since 2005 · Posted 2 Apr 2005 · 4 comments

if you call yourself an atheist then chances are won't have any idea what I'm talkijg about and are likely to think I'm crazy (I am) but staying on topic, what I'm really trying to say is that I started talking to my cieling last night and fell asleep holding a bible that I don't believe in it was strange, to be honest and I felt rather stupid but all the same, I wouldn't prefer it any other way because it's nice to think to yourself that either you know something wonderful that all else have missed or that you are really insane and they haven't found out yet.

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[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Apr-05/11:25 PM Reply
Spell Check, Please. Verse 1 Line 2. Reread that. Actually, on second thought, reread before you post. Thats what the whole page to review before submission is all about. So that you can take a quick reread and catch the obivious spelling mistakes, i.e. "talkijg".

Other than that, this is almost more of a blog post than a poem. Look me in the eye and tell me otherwise if I'm mistaken.

"it's nice to think to yourself
that either you know something wonderful
that all else have missed"

Minus the quotation marks, thats how those lines should be broke.

<3 Jason
[n/a] zodiac 3-Apr-05/4:10 AM Reply
Yeah, we're not likely to understand, especially considering this exact idea has been overdiscussed since Torah times.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3-Apr-05/8:38 AM Reply
Right now you're in the transitional phase between Judaism and Christianity. Keep reading the Bible, and keep praying. You'll get there in the end, and when you do you'll know what it means to be at One with Jesus. Thank you and God Bless.
[n/a] not_a_philosopher › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Aug-05/5:08 PM Reply
you make me feel very uncomfortable when you say things like that.