poemranker ::Tide by fevriere

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Free verse № 123032

Tide

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Apr 2005 · 0 comments

Luscious rain and light and, foreign, further-off.. half a milky orb caught in night's nets. It is dusk and the light is persistant but dying. That is the way things go as birds fly along the grain of the sky and not against or least, not until the earth or sky turns over from the season of cocoa to the season of sweet dirt.

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