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Free verse № 123414

Dancing

Member since 2005 · Posted 14 Apr 2005 · 2 comments

Dancing dancing through out life dancing up the stairs dancing my way back down Dancing Dancing dancing through out life dancing up to you dancing my way away Dancing Dancing dancing through out life dancing up to hate (kicking him in the balls) dancing my way away Dancing

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[6] thepinkbunnyofdoom 15-Apr-05/10:19 AM Reply
Looks like a textbook example from chem. 101, and almost as boring. "(kicking him in the balls)" is the only saving grace. -6-
[2] Christof 16-Apr-05/4:44 AM Reply
Not a philosopher.

Or a poet.