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Valentine?

Member since 2004 · Posted 31 Jan 2006 · 5 comments

Candy, and roses We rub noses, Hearts are in the air Girls so fine and fair There is this special someone Who i love a ton. Girl every thing will work out fine Will you be my Valentine?

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[7] Ranger 1-Feb-06/5:30 AM Reply

The penultimate line is far too long given how quick the rest of the poem is, line 6 is a bit cheesy, other than that a very readable ditty.

[7] Ranger › Ranger 1-Feb-06/5:31 AM Reply

Oh, and take out the comma in line one.

[n/a] Nicholas Jones 1-Feb-06/12:50 PM Reply

I hate postmodernism, it's become impossible to tell when something is cleverly ironic and deconstructive or just shit. On this one I'm going for the latter.

[0] god'swife 1-Feb-06/8:06 PM Reply

looks like it's written by a hop-hop Eskimo trying to crossover to boy-band inspired greeting cards.

[1] LilMsLadyPoet 2-Feb-06/8:56 AM Reply

LOL...God's wife...and I'm with you Nich