Limerick № 126716
Perfect place
Suddenly my world it such a perfect place,
only because of your loving grace.
All at once I see in a new light,
everything is so clear, so bright.
As long as youâre here by my side,
and our hands intertwine.
Oh and when you kiss my lips,
my heart skips beats and does flips.
When you stare into my eyes,
I see the perfect starry skies.
I see windows to you soul and doors to your heart,
in this I know we will never be apart.
I listen to your heart beats,
I hear what it says, I know what it speaks.
It speaks of love, passion, and care,
this wanting feeling I canât just bare.
Do you see why my soul can fly?
And the knowing that youâll never say good-bye.
There will never be lasting sorrow,
just in knowing that there will be a tomorrow.
With you here next to me,
with our souls being free.
Abiding this beautiful feeling,
We are gliding, no flying.
As long as my arms are rapped around you,
Iâll never be sad or blue.
All because Iâll always love you,
and in knowing that you love me too.
So do you see why my world is such a perfect place?
I know it every time you kiss me, look into my eyes, or even softly touch my face.
6 comments
my heart skips beats and does flips.<<
'Oh' as in 'oh, by the way'?
Delete 'and'
The second line reads bad. Delete 'does'.
The horrible thing is that this physical phenomenon is exactly what occurs, when you're in luvv. Except when you're over 21, you'll think you're heading for a coronary.
The more horrible thing is that this has been written a zillion times over, mostly by lovesick 14 year old girls...I don't blame you your age and state of luvv but it's so boring, this way.
>>As long as my arms are RAPPED around you,
Iâll never be sad or blue.<<
Your poor sweetheart must be; black&blue...
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