CAN'T TAKE THE PAIN

Member since 2005 · Posted 20 Jul 2005 · 5 comments

Put your eyes on my face For the last time 'Cause I'm getting out of this maze Your love makes me feel low down And it hurts, I can't take the pain I was watching A late night show And the wall of our room Was changing colours I saw you through the corner of my eye You were not yourself And I know why? The words that you hide Were making your heart heavy Your love had vanish away from me And you can't look at me 'Cause you love somebody,besides me Well,if you think I'm gonna hold you And I'm gonna cry No,I'm too tried To do the same thing again 'Cause it's high time now And I can't take the pain.

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5 comments

[n/a] <~> 20-Jul-05/7:43 AM Reply

this makes a good Lyric.

[n/a] prettyktm › <~> 21-Jul-05/4:41 AM Reply

thank you so much for your comment.

[n/a] prettyktm › prettyktm 21-Jul-05/4:42 AM Reply

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Jul-05/5:07 PM Reply

This makes me sick. How dare you sully us with the lurid details of your dumpling of a love-life? This is a poetry website, and poetry is about thoughts, feelings, and emotions. Not tawdry 'late night' shows interspersed with teenage 'menages a trois.' Great poeme though :( -10-

[n/a] prettyktm › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Jul-05/9:53 PM Reply

Sorry for that,but love is not only the expression about love,ah
there are many other expression inculed in it.like.sadness,and I
have just wrote one of the expression of it.thank you for your ah
comment.take care.