poemranker ::Mending by elderking

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Free verse № 128799

Mending

Member since 2005 · Posted 21 Jul 2005 · 1 comment

I never knew together could really mean alone, when love's an empty tapestry of promises unsown. It once seemed so easy, not so long ago, when love was sweet embroidery we weren't afraid to show. Now the stitches loosen loving's fragile thread, knotting doubt securely in all we leave unsaid. Our passion has grown thin patched in hurried, thoughtless ways. So carelessly untended our love, unmended, frays.

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[n/a] elderking 22-Nov-05/4:28 PM Reply
Thanks for the comments. I've always had a little trouble knowing when the piece is "complete" or if it still needs some work. This piece I've been writing and rewriting for over 10 yrs!