poemranker ::book drop here by A. Nomaly

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Free verse № 144837

book drop here

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Jul 2006 · 2 comments

community charge placement machine (credit card swipe) 100 free minutes started already home allowed (loud) dog bites hard I can't take you home anymore so fickle a burned case (not afraid) every Tues. and Thurs.

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[6] Dovina 27-Jul-06/3:16 PM Reply
Your last one, with its funky mis-grammar, made sense to me, but this one doesn't. It looks like as collection of scattered thoughts.
[n/a] A. Nomaly › Dovina 30-Jul-06/2:53 PM Reply
it's about collection and building, the use and building of credit, platforms for understanding and conceptualizing people, relationships, items, existence, how thought thin they are (fickle and easily burned), so urgent and necessary (like tuesday and thursday), it gets personal