poemranker ::sculpture by ThePariahDog

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Free verse № 129520

sculpture

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Aug 2005 · 3 comments

here i stand roughly hewn from a block lifeless too excavated in tawdry glint eye collapse with consent

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3 comments

[n/a] ALChemy 12-Aug-05/6:44 AM Reply
This is a concrete poem. Pretty neat on too.
[7] Dovina 12-Aug-05/7:25 PM Reply
The first 4 lines are good, given the tight restraint you've chosen. The last 4 lines drift from the theme.
[8] nypoet22 7-Mar-10/6:54 PM Reply
neat!