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Table for Two Please

Member since 2007 · Posted 24 Oct 2007 · 2 comments

skin is our wrapper this evening the filling a mixture of meats with meaning giving life to the rest of the best of the serving called man

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[8] INTRANSIT 27-Oct-07/3:41 PM Reply

Sorry. Even broken up, rest of the best, bugs me.

[n/a] Musicman › INTRANSIT 4-Nov-07/1:56 AM Reply

Yep, I can see it. But this was one of those exercies in a stream of consciousness that took me just a minute to write. Unlike most, I will lt this one stand on its own merits but I do see your point. Thank you again for your gift!